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Message to Readers
If anyone could point out the grammatical errors I made and tell me what you think of the piece, your favorite part, and how it made you feel. Any advice would be greatly appreciated.
"Think about the next time you have, 'Better things to do.'" It's such a great, profound line!
Regret for the times I may have done that, sadness, grief, inspiration.
How did you come up with such an aspiring and beautiful story?!
Thank you so much for writing " The Man You Didn't Help"! I hope others will read this and ponder its gorgeous truth.
You are a very talented writer and I hope to read more of your work!