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I'd say this has a reflective tone and is not really a critique. It's an interesting idea because you leave the "kind" of blue up to interpretation. Is it blue as in sadness, or blue as in peace and quiet?
I think the pattern and rhyme scheme in this poem is beautiful. The topic seems to be your life, maybe focused on the summertime. I think it just makes a really nice picture in the reader's mind and it was actually pretty relaxing to read.
I'm left feeling blue, of course, but more of a "cool" and relaxed blue rather than a down in the dumps blue. I liked it because I did feel like I was seeing all of these images through a blue hue.
This is a cool poem! I didn't feel like it was really commentary on anything, but it doesn't have to be if you don't want it to. I like the observational tone as well.
Thanks for writing! :)