Peer Review by Preta Peace Namasaba (Uganda)

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Look Up

By: Daisy


https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=0NHKW9uMhO0

Lyrics:

People are always looking down
Down at the low down boring ground
They never look up to see the sky

People forget to be themselves
Too busy being someone else
They never jump up to see if they can fly

But you are stronger than you know
And you can change the world

So look up
Look up
When everybody round you says you’re falling apart
Look up
Look up
You’re the only one to tell you how you are

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

So start looking up at the sky
You’ll start wishing that you could fly
When you start dreaming your world will change

You’ll do things you never dreamed of
Help so many other people
You’ll start seeing the sunshine there is in the world

’Cause you are stronger than you know
And you can change the world

So look up
Look up 
When everybody round you says you’re falling apart
Look up
Look up
You’re the only one to tell you who you are

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

There is so much to do
There is so much to see
If you’ll look up at the sky and fly

So look up
Look up
When everybody round to usays you’re falling apart
Look up
Look up
You’re the only one to tell you who your are

Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh
Oh oh oh oh oh oh oh oh

Look up at the sky


 


Message to Readers

First time writing a song! Let me know what you think!


Peer Review

This song is about humanity as general concentrating on trifles yet there are bigger and better things in life. It's also about widening our perspectives, because when you look at the ground, the vision is limited but looking at the sky shows a great expanse that never ends. At the end, I feel inspired to go after the bigger things in life.


Look up to the sky stands out for me because it speaks of expanding our horizons.


I feel the writer would do more with the verses. The subject can really be expounded upon.


Keep on it. Look up to the sky and expand your horizons.


Reviewer Comments

The lyrics are great and very inspirational.I would love to hear them sang.