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Message to Readers
First time writing a song! Let me know what you think!
This song is about humanity as general concentrating on trifles yet there are bigger and better things in life. It's also about widening our perspectives, because when you look at the ground, the vision is limited but looking at the sky shows a great expanse that never ends. At the end, I feel inspired to go after the bigger things in life.
Look up to the sky stands out for me because it speaks of expanding our horizons.
I feel the writer would do more with the verses. The subject can really be expounded upon.
Keep on it. Look up to the sky and expand your horizons.
The lyrics are great and very inspirational.I would love to hear them sang.