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The time period and the language used to describe and create such vivid and splendid emotion.
The conflict is at a perfect balance—not too much, but enough for the readers to experience it themselves, and to connect with the story.
How did Louis die? :(
Keep writing! I would absolutely love to read more about these beautiful characters! Gorgeous story!!
Simply saying, it was gorgeous!
The emotion expressed through your words is touching. The story is so sweet! The love between Rita and Louis is so real!
Keep writing! You are very, very talented!
I can't wait to read more of your beautiful work!