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The deep emotion embedded within this piece made me feel what this women was feeling. Stunning.
I was completely enthralled by the short. I was curious about her regrets; what were they? Even without revealing those, the piece flowed very well and kept my attention.
I loved this piece. Very well thought through. I have a question, if you would be so inclined to answer, what was the writing process? Did you jump around or write from beginning to end? What inspired you? Thanks:) Keep up the excellent work!