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The title might not fit. If anyone thinks of a better title, please tell me.
I was surprised by how well-sculpted this piece is. Very good.
I think it's detailed enough, but adding a few additional ideas wouldn't hurt.
It is overall wonderful. I was speechless when I first read it. You are very talented. Keep going.