Peer Review by dreisch98 (United States)

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Split

By: j.baustian


PROMPT: All Talk

"Dad, do you think I could go this friday night?"
"Go where?"
"I thought mom would've told you!?"
"No, mom hasn't come home lately. She is staying at Aunt Jesse's"
"Why?" 
"I don't know Alex, why don't you ask her that!"
"No, I don't want to bother her."
"So where did you want to go this weekend?"
"Well I was hoping to..."


Peer Review

Very well done my fellow American.


Sadness


Reviewer Comments

You should publish this.