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I was delighted by how authentic the sibling relationship was and how realistic the characters were! Of course Jamie wouldn’t completely understand, she’s only young and of course Kara would be feeling resentment towards their mother for this treatment but I also like how near the end that Kara stated she’d try and get help for their mother’s addiction too.
You were very good at explaining & accurately converting a lot of information in a short amount of words here & as such I don’t have any questions that wouldn’t potentially lead to you writing a sequel/continuation of this world.
I love the emotional sense of this piece combined with Kara’s determination to protect Jamie. It’s fantastic