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Make me a better writer.
Written By: Chandler
July 9, 2019
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Dani A. Remlap
This is really good. I love how vivid and evocative this poem is. I adore this. You're becoming a fine poet
This was an exquisite poem, and a pleasure to read. One point of constructive criticism I have, the two images of the tightrope and the bridge seems to be a bit jarring, going from one to the other so fast with not a lot of background or detail. I suggest to pick one and develop the imagery more.
But great work, and keep writing! :)
I like how you structure your work and evenly choose your words painting a picture as clear as day that evoke so much emotion.
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