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This song is about a woman that is trapped in an abusive relationship. She feels trapped and doesn't know what to do, or how to get out ofte nightmar she's trapped in.
I found that this song tells a story about someone who feels trapped and scared. But one thing I will say is that, if I hadn't read the footnote I never would have known that it is about a woman in an abusive relationship.
"Now I'm trapped in this nightmare/*forest* with no one to save me". Quite liked this part, as it really helped me imagine what kind of hardship the character is going through. I also liked the verse above it (which I highighted)
I think it would be good if we got more details about the woman's hardship, maybe more about what's happening in her life. As I mentioned above, I wouldn't have known what it was really about. So maybe add a verse giving detail about the abuse.
Other than what I mentioned above, this is a really great song. And I think the soundcloud recording is great and you have a really nice voice. I enjoyed reading and listening to the song. Good luck on the album.
Really good song. I liked listening to it, keep up the good writing and singing.
PS. are you putting the full album on soundcloud when you're finished? I'm interested to know the rest of the story.