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Kate Livewire

Philippines

Hi guys!
I'm Kate Livewire, here and on SoundCloud (and everywhere else XD)
I'm a bookworm, singer-songwriter, and a writer of few and far between stories (because of writer's block).
Hope you enjoy my works, and I hope to improve over time! :)

Anomaly

July 9, 2019

Here is a link to a rough recording of this if you want to listen!
https://soundcloud.com/katelivewire/anomaly-extremely-rough-draft-for-write-the-world-songwriting-contest/s-uwy7P


I wonder how our feelings grow
Ain't it strange
The places our thoughts can go
Outer space
Wondering what path 
I should take
It's strange to think about

Right now I hate reality
And this life
I'm trying hard not to repeat
Things twice
But mistakes keep piling up and I
Can't find the strength to leave

Dive...
Headfirst into the pit
Fly...
Don't you hesitate my love

You see I have learned my lessons through fear
The prices I've paid were far too near
To my heart and I bear the price
Never got off easy with life

Now I'm trapped in this forest with no one to save me
(Can't go now)
If I try to escape I wonder if you'll chase me
(Down this time)
My thoughts are all scattered but I have to calm down
(Stop and think)
I'm trapped in my own home there's nothing else to do
(But run away)
*SPOILERS*
This song is part of an album I'm writing that centers on a woman whose boyfriend has started to become abusive. We follow her journey from the start of their relationship (when he was still a good person) until the end of their relationship (when she finally runs away and ends it). 
This song happens around the time when she realizes she can't let herself freeze up anymore and she has to get out of here. 
So, does the song convey the story well? Please let me know! :)

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3 Comments
  • Kate Livewire

    @catgirl_55555 and @Gabriel Goodwin, thank you both so much!!! I'm really glad you like the song and recording. And yes, I'll try to record with better quality :)


    4 months ago
  • Gabriel Goodwin

    The song is good and I like your voice as well :D Only problem for me was the audio of the recording was kinda weak, so if you can re-record that with better audio, you'd do amazing.

    I also like the story you played out in the song! I had an idea of the story in my mind, but when you explained it, I liked the story better.

    Hope you keep up at it! Have a great day!


    4 months ago
  • etheryal

    the song and recording are really good !! all the best for the contest :)


    4 months ago