Are you reading my bio again?!
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Thank you for reading this poem!! Somethings that I would like advice on, do you think "sweet" was the right word on Line 3? Also, do if you have any areas where you think you could fit a rhyme? Lastly, I think it sounds weird when I wrote "fuel bars" in Line 6 what do you think? Thank you for the advice!!
Written By: ajamwal
July 22, 2019