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Wrote this in about 10 minutes, where should I go from here?
"This paired chalk and cheese..." They are such unique words and items put together to form such a beautiful meaning and sentence!
It gave a sense of past, but also of present and future times, in the mention of war and the ghouls that surround us.
A lovely poem, yet filled with the emotion of the past and present times of hardship. Your words went gracefully, and your inspirational messages are stacked high with expression.
And amazing job writing such a beautiful piece in 10 minutes!