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The ending really got me. The way they describe anger and how it consumes you then how you can turn it into motivation. LIke getting revenge on the world because it fucked you up. (sorry for the language)
Just the stanza about good intentions. I got a bit lost. Just try and reword it or develop on the idea.
The ending was my favorite part. Although this poem was long, I think it was the perfect length because they built up the fury and anger so perfect so that the reader completely empathizes from where they are coming from. SO DAMN GOOD