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Cannonball (Inspired by "The Cellar" by Natasha Preston/"Cannonball" by Lea Michele)

July 2, 2019

PROMPT: On Courage

Looking at the window
Soaking up the sunshine
I know I have to get out
So all will be fine

Being here is wrecking me inside
I need to be out there
Loving the outside
Somewhere other than here

Someone will be waiting for me
I toss some stones to the window
To break free
Silently hoping for a hero

I don't want to lose my momentum 
I am so close
To getting everything I want
Gosh, this blows!

Give me the freedom I deserve
I don't care if I get killed
You can't stop my courage
Or the way I feel

So finally I chose to wait for no one
Nobody can stop my path
To see my family
If you try, you face my wrath

This kidnapping has gone for too long
People miss me back home
It is wrong not to fight
They are looking for places to roam

I looked outdoors
Smelling the wonderful grass
I know I had to do it
So I popped the glass

By the time I am out 
With the sun beaming down
My captor is aware
He began chasing me around

But I found my way
To my house
My mom and dad greeting me
Crying their eyes out

I knew he took me 
Since I am gay
This should be normal
This should be a predictable way

To love anyone
To love everyone
Because at the end of the day
What's done is done

I am so happy 
I am glad I am gone
Because I prevailed
Like a cannonball


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  • Dmoral13

    This one's for you! <3 #throwback
    (Don't forget to read the footnotes, perhaps even read that first)

    about 2 months ago
  • Samina

    Hi! So happy to just review a message from you. I am great! Hope you are also doing well.

    about 2 months ago
  • Samina

    Hi, how are you. Haven't been there since a long time.

    2 months ago
  • Samina

    @bride124 it is just so great of you. Really appreciate your enthusiasm for reviewing.

    5 months ago
  • bride124

    @weirdo, I am on it right now! I don't need anything reviewed but thanks for offering!

    5 months ago
  • weirdo

    I love this! The last two lines are so powerful.

    Btw part 3 is out!
    I really appreciate you offering to review. I know I already said this but, once again, let me know if you would like me to review anything of yours!

    5 months ago
  • bride124

    @Samina, thanks so much! This means so much to me. I am actually writing your review right now!

    5 months ago
  • Samina

    @bride124 love the way you write... Just get lost in it.

    5 months ago