Peer Review by lizharris (United States)

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Symptoms

By: Domini Snow


PROMPT: All Talk

I can't sleep.
That's not my problem, go tell someone who cares!
I feel sad.
You're a teenager. Its just part of growing up
I don't feel like eating.
How selfish of you! Kids in africa would die to to eat this.
I can't get out of bed.
Stop being lazy.
...
...
Can i go to the doctors?
And have them do what?
Help me...
No one can help you, i think whiner is permantly ingraved in your throat
Mum please!
...

This is about the struggles of teenagers talking about mental health with parents.

Peer Review

The child is begging for help but the mother dismisses it.


I understand this pretty well myself...so probably familiarity.


Reviewer Comments

I feel you.