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Our Talk

By: Angela Soria

PROMPT: All Talk

"Hey, are you okay?"
"Yea I'm okay a little tired but I'm okay."
"Why are you tired?"
"Stayed up late last night doing Byrd's work, don't get me wrong it's fairly easy just there's a lot of it."
"Hey, can I ask you another question?"
"Y-yeah, what is it?"
"Are we okay?"
"What? Yes, of course, we're okay. Why? Do you feel we're not okay?"
"I do but everyone question us since lunch"
"What, why?"
"Because you left the store without me"
"because you left the store smiling with another guy..."
"Oh, I'm sorry Alex needed help carrying the stuff back to class. Dammit, that probably look bad didn't it, I should have stayed with you."
"'s okay."
"No, it's not, regardless of what I had to do I should have stayed with you. At least, I should have told you I was leaving, I'm a horrible girlfrie-."
"Don't you finish that sentence."
"You're not horrible."
"Listen let's put this behind us okay?"
"Listen I love you okay this little bullshit is not going to do anything. I don't care what people think of us, the only thing I care about is you."
"y-you really mean it?"
"Yes, of course, I do."


Message to Readers

Just an everyday subject that comes up in relationships.

Peer Review

They're both teenagers in love

a little confused, but this is good!

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