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Message to Readers
this is my new series of short stuff.
this piece was written after I held one of my regular, everyday conversations with another human being.
i love the idea of being social, i just have poor execution is all
Peer Review
this was 1001% relatable, as I have social anxiety 1001% of the time
I don't really have any questions except where'd you get your sense of humor? Because I love it!
Reviewer Comments
the metaphor about the gears was also quite funny