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All the fantastical creatures contained in here are really cool. I like the way you described their action during the siege on the castle and how it pertained to the set of rules of what each one could do individually
Since this competition is looking for relatively short stories I understand that there’s not much time for character development but I would have like to have seen more of Anna. She’s described a bit but then doesn’t really get more of a part in the story to herself.
There’s nothing standing out in your draft that confused me.
Crafting entire new worlds is hard but also so rewarding! You had something great going with your description of the mythical creatures in the fight scene so maybe you could give that a little bit more focus if you are to do another draft?
With a little bit of polish this story will be a strong contender in the competition