_TJNR@cheshire_

Australia

I am Talise and I write to express myself. I believe that everyone should have a voice even someone like me who is just 12. Please do not judge me by my age as that would be extremely primitive and highly rude:)

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Write Free

In the words of Oscar Wilde...
"Be yourself because everyone else is taken."
I strive to be a valuable, approachable and inspirational member of write the world so please feel free to ask me anything you like, don't be shy :)
I appreciate any feedback, comments and reviews, positive or constructive!
Thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love yourself, the world around you and feel free to be you!

P.S. If you would like to contact me outside of WTW my email is rosemary.n.sage9@gmail.com and my IG is @_talise65_

The broken promises

June 9, 2019

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5
the broken promises
kill me silently

a thousand thank you's I owe
unrepaid

tears tumble from my eyes clumsily
for hope was forever lost

the broken promises
get to you

don't make the same mistakes
as I did long ago
 
Okay.....so this got pretty deep. I wrote this as an apology for all the broken promises I have made on write the world and it seems to have struck a nerve. Anyway, this was just a little dedication to all those who I owe. I have been off WtW for a year and now promise to fix what I have broken. So sorry- _TJNR@cheshire_

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5 Comments
  • _TJNR@cheshire_

    Thank you and no problem!


    2 months ago
  • and-peggy

    Great writing! And thanks for your comment on my contest, by the way!


    2 months ago
  • Quille

    That's awesome! (sorry for an overdue reply) Hope high school is really awesome for you! Things are pretty busy here too :D
    Lots of love right back at ya! :DDDD


    5 months ago
  • _TJNR@cheshire_

    Thanks so much! I'm doing really good now and have just started high school
    (so naturally things are a little busy). But, I am back on track now!
    Lots of love to you :)


    5 months ago
  • Quille

    Talise! How are you? I've missed you so much! Don't worry about broken promises, I'm glad you're back :) Happy Belated Birthday as well :DDDD


    5 months ago