“In the darkness, two shadows, reaching through the hopeless heavy dusk. Their hands meet, and light spills in a flood, like a hundred golden urns pouring out the sun.” -Madeline Miller, “The Song Of Achilles.”
I need feedback!!! Quite desperately!! On anything really but very much about pacing and smooth continuity. Also, anyone got any tips on fitting everything I need into 1000 words?
Written By: PouringOutTheSun
June 13, 2019