Peer Review by allieskattum (United States)

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The Gambler

By: Maggie Mills


PROMPT: Quartet

He straightened his tie, fingered his cuffs, cocked his head and gave a liar's smile.  


Peer Review

"gave a liar's smile" This shows that the character is not who he presents himself as.


Does he show himself as being perfect and nice all the time?


Reviewer Comments

I like this because it is mysterious but you still get the main idea of what you are trying to portray.