Peer Review by outwalkingthelights (United Kingdom)

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The Gambler

By: Maggie Mills


PROMPT: Quartet

He straightened his tie, fingered his cuffs, cocked his head and gave a liar's smile.  


Peer Review

"fingered his cuffs" - shows he is a man of wealth and yet he is entitled "The Gambler". It makes one want to read on.


I'd like to know what he is gambling and why.


Reviewer Comments

Very enticing. I'd love to read this man's story.