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What is the significance of the numbers in the third and fourth paragraphs?
I'm a little bit confused, but it sounds like a great story!
Why can they only make one mistake? It seems like everyone would be dead before their first birthday.
I would suggest making it 3 mistakes...a three strikes you're out kind of thing. That would make it more intense!