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I would love for some constructive critique!
Meabh - Maeve or May-v
Tadgh - Tag or Tau-gh
The mysteries of the Faerie wood and the beautiful descriptions caught my attention right away.
I definitely wanted to know more about Meabh. I wanted to know why she asked for a single coin. Another character that I found interesting was the Alder King and why he gave her an enchanted coin. Overall, the characters in this story were well-developed and interesting to read about!
I was a little confused at why Meabh couldn’t leave. Was it because the Alder King liked her inventions? The story mentioned that the Wild Hunt would hurt any mortal that would cross through the forest, and that Meabh was free to leave, but she wouldn’t, for fear of getting hurt.
Another part that I found slightly confusing was the mention of Winter. Is Winter a city/town or does it refer to the season?
This is a really well-written piece! It isn’t easy to write a story in 1,000 words, but I think you did an amazing job!
I really liked the way this world was portrayed in this piece! The vivid descriptions and intriguing characters captured my attention from the start! The beautiful prose was definitely one of the highlights of this piece! Good job!