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Message to Readers
I would love for some constructive critique!
Meabh - Maeve or May-v
Tadgh - Tag or Tau-gh
There were flowers, nature everywhere. This piece is a bit similar to the novel I have started to write:)
I felt like I knew more of what the King thought of and what he was like than I knew about Meabh.
None, the repercussions Meabh would face was clearly stated.
I'd like some more background information, why is she there? What are her real intentions?
Some areas could use some more work as they don't sound as smooth. Other then that, I like the idea and where this is going!