Peer Review by Daisy (United States)

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my friend, the ocean

By: adlyn

PROMPT: Water Body

I make my way to you,
Moonlight reflecting,
Silent, vigilant,
Asking what I’m doing.
“I don’t know,”
I whisper to your waves
Then your tide hugs my ankles
It’s alright, it’s alright.
As I sit, slightly soaked,
You show me a sweet melody,
A steady beat with a lilting harmony,
And I breathe-
In and out and in and out-
With your song.

Peer Review

I like how your words make the ocean seem like a friend.

I feel relaxed and at peace, like I just had a long meaningful talk with my best friend.

Reviewer Comments

Keep on writing! You have a gift.