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You put an excellent spin on this classic fairy tale. I thoroughly enjoyed how you incorporated princesses and shapeshifters; it added character.
I feel like you could expand more on this story, and dive deeper into the “true story” of little red riding hood. I am yearning to learn more about Clarissa, Anvil, and Red.......you could maybe use this as a guide to write a short series of stories!
No, I felt like everything was consistent and explained in depth.
This is a really good start to something that is amazing. I feel like your details are excellent, the plot line is logical, and all in all, it’s really quite lovely. There are a few spots with grammatical errors, as well as spots were the wording isn’t quite right, so I would suggest reading it aloud to yourself, and fixing spots as you see fit.
I would love to see this as a series. Great job!