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I like how this narrative is written like a fictional piece in 3rd person, and then, in the end, turned out to be a true story.
How are you now, after everything that happened, are you okay?
I like the title, the end is really cool. Okay, not cool, but interesting. The topic, in general, is interesting. It's also written well.