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I like this because it raises facts about a really important issue that needs to be solved.
I would like to know more about what should change and how the trans and LGBTQ+ community is being affected. I also accept that this may be just an introduction and it doesn't needs all this information.
I find this a really good thing to talk about because not enough people are talking about these rights. Its also good to hear from the younger generation, especially someone the same age as me who I can relate to, because after all it is our future.