Peer Review by mason wong (United States)

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The Room

By: TheEmoAssassin


FREE WRITING

Crying from the pain
Blood spattering on the walls
A nightmare come true.


Peer Review

I am surprised that you use a sad description to describe the room.


I see that it is quite sad, what makes you write it like this?


Reviewer Comments

You are a talented poem writer, keep writing!!!!!!