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I am absolutely delighted by the style of the poem! I always love when a writer uses spaces and formatting to emphasize certain words or phrases.
You might deepen further on feeling left with the narrator after everything is stolen. You touch on it a bit, but not enough to get the reader emotionally invested in the piece.
Overall, I really like this poem! The formatting worked well to bring an impact to the poem. I believe you just need to add a bit more to the poem to bring the reader in. Thanks for writing this!