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This poem is so beautiful and captures the emotions that the writer wants to convey perfectly!
I think this is great as is. Poetry is much less restrictive than other forms of writing, so you're free to play around with it as you like.
You are such a talented poet! This poem gave me a really warm, serene feeling. I can't wait to read more of your work!