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I loved the insight and how you transitioned from the walk to reflection to the walk again. I especially loved this line, "Teenagers are living paradoxes. Everything we do is superfluous, exaggerated. Big words, big ideas, nothing can be small. Everything is significant. " It rang true with me, and you phrase it beautifully.
The beginning really hooked me, but after that, even though your ideas are wonderful and the writing is precise, you might have to work on paragraph structure and spacing. It will make it easier to read.
I really resonated with this piece (I just recently turned 15 lol) great job! :)