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I think I am going to start a story about Death and Sarah. (Who later becomes Life.) I'd love some ideas to kickstart it. Credits will go to the respective person.
At first, I thought this was a miraculous survival story, and then it turned out to not be that. Pretty cool piece of work though.
I'm not sure that there would be anything else I would want to know.
This is a pretty good piece of fiction.