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Message to Readers
Maybe it's time to see what we left behind, my friends, the lost words in the forest are coming for us in the night, as dreams. Dreams are the only difference between us and the Void, for the Void can't tell the difference. Forgive me, my darkness, but you know not reality, continue this trek through the shadows.
This piece didn't strike me so much as an experience, but an idea, an opinion. The science-defying idea that our words are traveling is the main idea of this piece, and I found it to make an interesting story concept.
Your descriptions are good, but somewhat vague. What can you do to really make the reader understand and feel what is going on in this piece? Try to use all five senses.
Love this piece! The main idea is awe-inspiring and science-defying. Keep writing!