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Message to Readers
This is one of my more personal pieces. If anyone else is going through struggles in faith, I feel you. Also welcome to chat even if you don't struggle or associate with Christianity/faith :)
This is such a beautiful way of talking about God’s love. I was very moved by how personal this piece was, and how descriptive your language is!
I imagine this is very much something you write for yourself, so I don’t really have any suggestions! I would love to hear your story of how you came to believe in God, though. Maybe we could talk! :)
As a Christian, I really loved this piece for its personal significance to me and Christians everywhere. As a writer, I really appreciated it for its eloquence and personality. Good job!