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i was absolutely stunned by how much vivid description you managed to insert into such a mundane sounding instruction manual for how to get through the day. this is also actually a really good representation of depression? (i’m not too sure i don’t have it so i can’t say for certain) in that it requires actual effort for the narrator to get through the day so much so that they have to make a legit instruction manual for that?
absolutely nothing this was absolutely gorgeous
hands down one of my favourite pieces on this platform. so elegantly written and i loved the plot twist at the end to show how this was a teacher that felt this. so beautifully portrayed and i adore this so so much. thank you for brightening my day (ironically) with this gorgeously pessimistic piece