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"There's no use of remembering." This line clearly depicts the almost hopeless emotion the narrator was feeling.
I'm left with a sad feeling. The ending has a somber, hopeless tone.
What made you title it as you did?
You wrote this piece very well. While the flow is sometimes broken, your word choice is excellent. Also, I love how realistic the narrator's thought process is. I feel this is a real strength of the piece. She tries to rationalize her thoughts to feel better, yet reverts to more negative thoughts, which, while unfortunate, is sometimes how thought processes go. Overall, your piece is excellent. Great work! Keep writing!