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Message to Readers
This is just something that came to my head this morning, when I woke before the sun with the moonlight in my eyes. All your criticism is invited.
"And you grow never bored of life?" That made me stop and really ponder.
Beauty, wonder, hope.
How are you always so amazing at this?! Your word-structure, thought, meaning, and story in this piece are truly thrilling!
I love your brilliant use of language, your stanzas, and the message your words portray.
I sincerely look forward to reading more of your gallery of art work! Please keep writing, and never give up!
I hope you have a wonderful day, Hanan!