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The fact that he "slump[s] in the dying light and wait[s]" is most revealing. He sounds like an old, weatherworn man, expecting his end to come after a long and/or wearying life.
My interpretation of this description is that an old farmer is weary and expects to die soon. I would like to know more certainly what has made him so weary or what he actually has accomplished/experienced.
Good description, friend! You create a really vivid image here. I like!
I don't know how close my interpretation comes to your intention, but art is often ambiguous, depending on one's perspective. Nonetheless, if you wonder how I imagine your character as a farmer waiting to die, I shall gladly provide an explanation. As for word choice, I have commented in highlights.
All in all, this piece is great. Thank you for sharing it! and good luck on your future efforts, my friend.