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I would tell them that I read a little paragraph about the power of words.
I think the subject really gives this piece strength, and the passion it was written with. Even before I read your note at the bottom I could really tell that you cared about what you were writing about.
I don't understand when you say "they promise our deep and darkest fears" what are you trying to say here?
This was a great first piece! Simple yet powerful. Good luck with your writing!