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Message to Readers
Really any kind of feedback is fine with me. Just try to be nice with this, I've gotten like, one, maybe two notes about my writing, and they were from my mom. So, not alot of experience.
I would tell them that this piece is about a writer. A writer who likes to type on bouncy keys because they need a keyboard that can type as fast as ideas are flowing through their head. If I were to recommend this piece to someone, I'd recommend it to a fellow writer.
I felt like this was a relatable piece for writers because we've all been there. Our mind is racing faster than we can type or write! That is what gave this piece meaning to me.
There are a few places I highlighted that I felt could use more detail, including the introduction and conclusion. The beginning and end are very important. The beginning is what determines whether or not the reader keeps reading, and the end is what determines what the reader remembers your piece for. Keep that in mind as you think about those parts of a story, poem, or any other piece of writing.
Great, relatable, enjoyable piece! Keep writing!