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This is my first piece of writing on this website. I appreciate constructive criticism. Thanks!
the narrators lack of identity, and her attempts to find it.
i think it’s the constant motif of contrast that emphasises the narrator’s constant flux of identity, and therefore brining across the theme of a lack of self more clearly.
nope! this poem was crystal clear in its delivery of its message!
for a first time piece this was amazingly written! keep up this standard of writing and you’ll go very far!!! :D