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Well, I have to say: this piece was PURRRfectly delightful! I loved how each character and cat was unique, and how the author really put effort into showing, not telling. It was a funny and lighthearted chapter to read, but it also hinted at something deeper beneath the surface, arousing questions: what is this woman's story? How will the cats behave? Is Sylvia going to stop thinking about money?
The only critique I have is that Sylvia isn't as developed as I had hoped. That being said, I have no idea if you have big plans for her in the next chapters. I sure hope you do!
Really, this was amazing! I hope you continue to post on this story, as I will definitely be reading and reviewing anything that comes next.