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I would love to know what you think about this.
i really liked the evolution of the tone of the piece, moving from pessimism towards optimism, and ending off on a hopeful note. it is a little predictable, but in the wave of angstsy poetry this is a breath of fresh air.
perhaps you could provide a little more context? idk i love this poem on its own
though this was quite short it was really nice and refreshingly optimistic. good work!