Kepler

United States of America

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Message to Readers

I got bored. I am under no impression that this is good, I am just curious about your opinions.

Click, Click, Click.

September 23, 2019

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Footsteps on the marble floor.
    Click.
        Click.
            Click.

Coming closer.
Her heart pounded in her chest. 
    Thump.
        Thump.
            Thump.

Terror shot down her spine as the door flew open. She stared wide-eyed.
    "Found you!" He cackled.
Slowly, she stood up. She looked him straight in the eye.
    Blink.
        Blink.
            Blink.

She whirled around and began counting. Her eyes shut tight.
    "One."
        "Two."
            "Three."
A hundred numbers flew by. 
    "Ready or not, here I come!!!" She laughed, running down the hall.

Footsteps on the marble floor.
    Click.
        Click.
            Click.
I got bored.

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4 Comments
  • 3xlispe

    First I thought it was based on horror- and I guess it was- but then I read it again and realized they were playing hide and seek. You are an AWESOME writer!


    2 months ago
  • ♛DaBolo♛

    I really love poems with formating like this. I tried this once, but yours turned out so much better than mine. :)


    2 months ago
  • ThePaperSamurai

    I love the way you wrote this, so fresh and interesting. It gave me inspiration for a short story, thanks! :)


    2 months ago
  • Kess

    I love this! Definitely not what I was expecting at first


    2 months ago