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Any feedback at all is welcomed and appreciated.
I liked how similar it felt to my own life. I like to talk, and I never know when to stop. I like how there is a clear progression, albeit sad, throughout. The poem has an arch to it which is appealing to the reader.
I would like to know how abrupt this change was. It seemed sudden, but was it more gradual? Adding a trasitional period between talking and silence would enhance the writing and strengthen that arch.
Couple of grammatical errors, but good job!