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I have been working on this screenplay for 3 months, so please, PLEASE let me know what you think about it. It is my intentions to film this, but I don’t want to if y’all think it’s shit.
I loved the montage at the end...I also like the idea of a guy who sleeps through the apocalypse.
Does Chester remember anything from before the coma?
Don't forget to keep each character's voice up...it really lends to their characterization. Otherwise, great job! I wish I could see the film.