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This is a piece that I used for an Assignment.
I relate on another level to this piece and it’s actually one of the greatest things I’ve read describing (perhaps) depression.
The suspenseful lack of detail is spiny tingling and quite frankly, gave me goosebumps.
Maybe consider italicizing to symbolize duality. Other than that, perfect.